Sunday, July 09, 2006

Strange but True by Sofía

My family and I were very happy when we traveled to San Bernardo in February on holidays.
My mother, my sister and I stayed on the beach. The day was very hot and all was perfect but the sea was strange because the waves were very big.
In the afternoon, when the sun was down, the people came back to their houses when a strong storm started, one ray fell in the middle of the sea and the ghost of an old pirate appeared.

3 Comments:

At 5:10 PM, Blogger Estefanía said...

I like your story.It is very original.
Are the characters real?

 
At 1:08 PM, Blogger Flor said...

The story is good, but it could be more long.
1- Who was the pirate?
2- Is the story real?
3- Were they afraid?

Bye, bye

Flor

 
At 7:46 PM, Blogger Cinthia said...

The story is good. I like it.
1)Is the story real?

 

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